Beholder: Conductor Analysis

Analyzed on June 01, 2025
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Capsule Image
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Short Description
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Tags
Capsule Image Analysis
Current Steam Page
Capsule Image
Game capsule image
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Image Content Analysis
  • - The title font is gritty but slightly blends into the dark background, reducing readability; use a brighter outline or shadow for the “Beholder” text to increase contrast and legibility, as seen in Papers, Please.
  • - The genre or core gameplay is visually unclear at a glance; include a clear visual element (e.g., a key prop or symbol) that instantly signals theme, similar to how Cult of the Lamb uses its logo and iconography.
  • - The focal character is somewhat lost among similarly dark characters on the left; add subtle rim lighting or a spotlight effect to the main figure for instant focus, as Limbo’s capsule does brilliantly.
Short Description
Current Steam Page
Short Description

A Beholder series spin-off. Become a conductor of the Determination Bringer train: monitor passengers, report incidents, and carry out important Ministry assignments — whose level of secrecy depends only on your loyalty. And remember: mission success is very important to you!

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Description Analysis
  • {:length_check=>{:status=>"❌", :details=>276}, :clarity=>{:status=>nil, :details=>"⚠️ The description is slightly confusing due to vague terms like \"Determination Bringer train\" and \"Ministry assignments.\""}, :tone_match=>{:status=>nil, :details=>"✔️ The tone matches the game's mysterious and mission-focused theme."}, :usp=>{:status=>"USP", :details=>"⚠️ The USP is unclear; it mentions being a conductor and reporting incidents but doesn't highlight what sets the game apart from others."}, :generic_language=>{:status=>nil, :details=>"✔️ The description uses some unique terms specific to the game world."}, :feature_dump=>{:status=>nil, :details=>"⚠️ The description lists features but doesn't effectively showcase their benefits or why players should care."}, :suggestions=>"- Tip 1: Clearly define the game's unique mechanics and benefits to create a stronger USP.\n- Tip 2: Focus on highlighting the player experience and emotional connection to the game's world.", :improved_description=>"\"Take charge as a conductor on the secretive Determination Bringer train, fulfilling Ministry assignments with unwavering loyalty for thrilling missions and ultimate success!\" (169)"}
Tags Analysis
Current Steam Page
Store Tags

No store tags found

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Tag Analysis
  • {:tag_score=>nil, :suggested_tags=>["Management", "Political", "Dystopian", "Narrative", "Morality", "Decision Making"], :tag_evaluation=>"- ✔️ \"Adventure\" – accurately describes the type of gameplay.\n- ✔️ \"Indie\" – relevant for independent game status.\n- ✔️ \"Simulation\" – fits the gameplay mechanics.\n- ✔️ \"Strategy\" – accurately reflects the gameplay style.\n- ⚠️ \"Single-player\" – can be kept but not crucial for discoverability.\n- ⚠️ \"Steam Achievements\" – not necessary for discoverability.\n- ⚠️ \"Full controller support\" – not crucial for discoverability.\n- ⚠️ \"Steam Trading Cards\" – not essential for discoverability.\n- ⚠️ \"Steam Cloud\" – not crucial for discoverability.\n- ⚠️ \"Family Sharing\" – not essential for discoverability."}