Homam: An Inventor's Fist Analysis

Analyzed on June 02, 2025
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Capsule Image
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Short Description
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Tags
Capsule Image Analysis
Current Steam Page
Capsule Image
Game capsule image
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Image Content Analysis
  • 1. The game title font lacks strong contrast with the background, making it hard to read; increase brightness and add a drop shadow or outline for visibility, similar to how Stardew Valley emphasizes its title.
  • 2. The character art blends into the background and doesn’t stand out as the focal point; reposition or increase the size and saturation of the character like Dead Cells, where the hero is clearly the highlight.
  • 3. The capsule does not clearly convey genre or gameplay at a glance; include action elements or genre-defining icons as seen with Enter the Gungeon’s use of recognizable, dynamic imagery.
Short Description
Current Steam Page
Short Description

Experience a unique 2D pixel art platformer where satisfying pounding mechanics meet brain-teasing puzzles. Step into Homam’s shoes, a skilled hero with a powerful fist, and help the legendary inventor Al-Jazari on a time-traveling quest. Solve puzzles, and conquer challenges with agility and wit

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Description Analysis
  • {:usp=>{:status=>"USP", :details=>"- ⚠️ The description mentions unique mechanics but could highlight what sets the game apart more clearly."}, :clarity=>{:status=>nil, :details=>"- ⚠️ The description has some complex phrases that might confuse potential players."}, :tone_match=>{:status=>nil, :details=>"- ✔️ The tone matches the game genre and style effectively."}, :suggestions=>"- Tip 1: Simplify complex phrases to improve clarity.\n- Tip 2: Highlight one standout feature that truly sets the game apart.", :feature_dump=>{:status=>nil, :details=>"- ✔️ The description avoids overwhelming the reader with too many features."}, :length_check=>{:status=>"✔️", :details=>297}, :generic_language=>{:status=>nil, :details=>"- ✔️ The language used feels specific to the game and not generic."}, :improved_description=>"- \"Embark on a time-traveling adventure in a unique 2D pixel art platformer, mastering pounding mechanics and brain-teasing puzzles as skilled hero Homam. Help legendary inventor Al-Jazari in conquering challenges with agility and wit!\" (225)"}
Tags Analysis
Current Steam Page
Store Tags

No store tags found

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Tag Analysis
  • {:tag_score=>nil, :suggested_tags=>["Pixel Graphics", "Platformer", "Puzzle", "Time Travel", "Inventor", "2D", "Hand-drawn", "Unique Gameplay", "Adventure", "Indie"], :tag_evaluation=>"- ⚠️ \"Adventure\" – relevant but generic, consider more specific tags like \"Time Travel\" or \"Puzzle\".\n- ⚠️ \"Casual\" – not reflective of the game's mechanics, consider tags like \"Puzzle\" or \"Platformer\" instead.\n- ✔️ \"Indie\" – appropriate for the game being an independent title.\n- ⚠️ \"Single-player\" – not necessary as most games on Steam are single-player.\n- ❌ \"Steam Achievements\" – not relevant for discoverability, consider replacing with more descriptive tags."}